Writing IVc: Portfolio

Student ID: 06166

Writing IVc: Portfolio

(See: Note 1, below)

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	2	6	7	5	19	19/18*.2
Blog posts	9	5	15	22	39	13	103	103/150*.2
Words	616	221	3117	2835	4082	990	11980	11980/7500*.2
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

Essays	Short titles [+ links]	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Mega essy	07.10.10	22	1487	1	0	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	Favorite place	07.10.24	5	315	0	0	0	0
Movie review 07.11.11	movie review- Toy story (1st story)	07.11.07	5	491	2	1	1	0
Community life 07.11.25	brass band	07.11.23	5	470	1	1	2	0
TV in Japan 07.12.09	TV in Japan	07.12.07	6	371	0	7	1	0
Leaning with computers 07.12.21	Learning with computers	07.12.17	8	486	6	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	51	3620	10	9	4	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

I think my Community life essay is the best in my essays, because this essay has catcy title, links and photos. I think it is unique essay.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Kenji & pab in Seattle	07.08.15	17	bad
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Friendship ＆Adventure	07.11.14	33	better
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Toy story	07.11.14	39	good!
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Learning with computers	07.12019	26	good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	07.12.19	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	15	short
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	。・＊’。°coming of age day 。・＊’。°	08.01.06	16	better
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.01.09	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	23	better

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• Yes, I do. I have it in a sidebar

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

Hello, asu. I read your post. I have never watched this movie but I can know its story. It's interesting. I can understand easily. However I think you write about its director. And I think you put others photos.

--I receive this comment from ss partner.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	59	07.09.26
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	138	07.11.14
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)	79	---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	104

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	MOBY DICK	07.10.02	118	o
2-02	Anne of Green Gables	07.10.07	127	0
2-03	Mr. Bean	07.11.01	115	0
2-04	GUCCI	07.11.03	96	0
2-05	BRAD PITT	07.11.10	158	0
2-06	JUMANJI	07.11.14	123	0
2-07	Hulk	07.11.17	74	0
2-08	Lost Love and other stories	07.12.02	141	0
2-09	Gandhi	07.12.03	74	0
2-10	MOONFLEET	07.12.07	88	0
2-11	Audrey Hepburn	07.12.10	61	0
2-12	Project Omega	07.12.15	217	0
2-13	TITANIC!	07.12.22	67	0
2-14	The legends of Sleepy Hollow and Rip Van Winkle	07.12.23	115	0
2-15	Curious George Goes to the Hospital	08.01.05	112	0
2-16	Mr. Gumpy's Outing	08.01.05	40	0
2-17	Leo the Late Bloomer	08.01.05	53	0
2-18	Clifford's puppy days	08.01.05	92	0
2-19	Caps for sale	08.01.05	78	0
---	---	TOTALS:	1988	0

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My best book review: Project Omega
• There are many words
• I can understand about this story easily.
  

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	0
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	0
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	0
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	0
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	0
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	0
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	0
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	0
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	0
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? __2_ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. diary (78) photos (65) reviws (44) bookd (32) quickposts (23) essays (12) links (14) movies (10) cooking (7) portfolios (5) media (4) news (1)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	0
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	0
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? 63 posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	0
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* __3_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	0
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? __3_ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: short movie (taken by cellphone) song with picture (download from You tube) funny movie (download from You tube)	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. layout
   
2. photos
   
3. links
   

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• I think writing many sentences in English are good for improving our writing skills. I can remove my dislike for writing in English. But sometimes I write wrong English on my blog. I am not good at English user still, so I couldn’t find my mistake. I usually use Word for creating posts, but it is also cannot to find my mistake. I think I need study English grammar more and more and I want to check my blog from native English speaker.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• At first, writing many posts in English is very difficult and tired work for me. But now, it is not so hard. I did not post many times on September and October so I had to post many times on December and January. Writing many book reviews was very hard work for me. I think it is important for us to make up schedule for blog.

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

Proto-Portofolio 2-02: Essays

Fall Semester Essays

Essays	Short titles [+ links]	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Mega essy	07.10.10	22	1487	1	0	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	Favorite place	07.10.24	5	315	0	0	0	0
Movie review 07.11.11	movie review- Toy story (1st story)	07.11.07	5	491	2	1	1	0
4th essay 07.11.25	brass band	07.11.23	5	470	0	1	2	0
5th essay 07.12.09	TV in Japan	07.12.07	6	371	0	7	1	0
6th essay 07.12.21	Learning with computers	07.12.17	8	486	5	0	0	0
Totals	---	---							---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

Proto-Portfolio 2-01

Proto-Portfolio 2-01: Reviews, Posts and Words

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	2	5
Blog posts	9	5	15	22
Words	616	221	3117	2835
Sub-totals	625	226						---

portfolio

ID: 6166

Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words	Numbers of comments
Example	Restaurant: Star of India	2007.03.13	185	1
1st (introduction) April (150+ words)	seif-introduce	2007.04.11	172	0
2nd (campus life) May (200+ words)	My campus life	2007.05.24	248	0
3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+ words)	My favorite *^-^*	2007.06.17	442	6
4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+ words)	What is the Kumamoto people	2007.06.17	336	2
5th (review 1) July 2 (175+ words)	Web site review	2007.06.30	180	5
6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words)	Gmail and writing studio blog	2007.7.15	279	1
---	---	TOTALS:	1842	14

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

I think “What are Kumamoto people” is the best of my essays, because this essay is logical, and easy to read.

2.0. Comments

---	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog	Dreamgirls	2007.04.17	15	bad(short)
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog	which is bad?	2007.05.10	36	good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog	what is the Kumamoto people	2007.06.21	60	good!(including advice for me)
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays	my favorite *^-^*	2007.06.06	53	good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.06.06	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	45	good(I responded soon)
2.4.2. Any of your other posts	web site review	2007.07.04	30	good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.07.04	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	18	bad(short)

* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:

I got many comment from my classmate. Some people gave me good advices. My replay was a little short. Next term, I would like to write longer replay for good comment.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

---	Numbers of words	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial	47	2007.04.18
3.2. Best typing speed trial	104	2007.06.20
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials	97	2007.06.13 2007.06.20 2007.06.27

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Number of words	Numbers of comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
1-01	Babe-Pig in the city-	2007.04.22	92	0
1-02	The wrong Trousers	2007.04.27	170	0
1-03	Love or Money	2007.05.01	114	0
1-04	Curious George and the Fire-Fighter	2007.05.05	63	0
1-05	finding NEMO	2007.05.06	77	0
1-06	Marry Queen of Scots	2007.05028	175	0
1-07	Sinbad	2007.06.02	54	0
1-08	Heidi	2007.06011	56	0
1-09	William Tell	2007.06.26	30	0
1-10	Robinson Crusoe	2007.06.26	75	0
1-11	The Winner	2007.06.28	54	0
1-12	Mulan	2007.06.29	68	0
---	---	TOTALS:	1028	0

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• I think 1-02 is the best of in my book review.
  
• Because there are many words.
• I can understand content of this book easily.
  

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

---	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?	0
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	0
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?	0
5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?	0
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	0
5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural)	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)	0
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	0
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 2	---	---
Which labels, and how many posts each? diary(19) books(12) quickpost(11) essay(6) brass(5) movie(2) news(1) tv(1)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?	0
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	0
How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics? 32	---	---
5.3.2. Posts with multiple links	---	---
How many of your posts include three (3) or more links? 5	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	0
How many of your blog posts include other media? 3	---	---

5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

I want to enhance my article. I think some times I have mistakes. I would like to check my article before post it by using “Word”.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:

Before I start this blog, I don’t like to write in English, because it is very hard work for me, and I need much time. But now, I write easier than before. It is fun for me to post my article on my blog. I want to be better blogger.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:

I think this class is very unique. In this class, I could remove fear of writing from me. Making blog is fun. Comments from my classmate became encouragement to be better writer. If you write the more, you would be the better writer.