2008/01/09

Writing IVc: Portfolio

Student ID: 06166

Writing IVc: Portfolio

(See: Note 1, below)

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)
Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
0
2
6
7
5
19
19/18*.2

Blog posts 9
5
15
22
39
13
103
103/150*.2

Words 616
221
3117
2835
4082
990
11980
11980/7500*.2

TOTAL
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)
Essays

Short
titles

[+ links]
Dates
yy.mm.dd

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12

Mega essy

07.10.10
22
1487
1
0
0
0

Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26

Favorite place

07.10.24
5
315
0
0
0
0

Movie
review
07.11.11

movie review- Toy story (1st story)

07.11.07
5
491
2
1
1
0

Community
life

07.11.25

brass band

07.11.23
5
470
1
1
2
0

TV in Japan

07.12.09

TV in Japan

07.12.07
6
371
0
7
1
0

Leaning with computers

07.12.21

Learning with computers

07.12.178
486
6
0
0
0





















Totals---
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51
3620
10
9
4
0
Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

I think my Community life essay is the best in my essays, because this essay has catcy title, links and photos. I think it is unique essay.

2.0. Comments


Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

Kenji & pab in Seattle

07.08.15
17
bad
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

Friendship &Adventure

07.11.14
33
better
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
Toy story
07.11.14

39

good!
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
Learning with computers


07.12019


26

good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.12.19
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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15

short
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

。・*’。°coming of age day 。・*’。°

08.01.06

16

better
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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08.01.09
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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23

better





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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?


  • Yes, I do. I have it in a sidebar

2.6. Additional reflections on comments


Hello, asu. I read your post. I have never watched this movie but I can know its story. It's interesting. I can understand easily. However I think you write about its director. And I think you put others photos.

--I receive this comment from ss partner.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials


Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
59
07.09.26
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
138
07.11.14
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)
79
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 104




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01

MOBY DICK

07.10.02
118
o
2-02

Anne of Green Gables

07.10.07
127
0
2-03

Mr. Bean

07.11.01
115
0
2-04

GUCCI

07.11.03
96
0
2-05

BRAD PITT

07.11.10
158
0
2-06

JUMANJI

07.11.14
123
0
2-07

Hulk

07.11.17
74
0
2-08

Lost Love and other stories

07.12.02
141
0
2-09

Gandhi

07.12.03
74
0
2-10

MOONFLEET

07.12.07
88
0
2-11

Audrey Hepburn

07.12.10
61
0
2-12

Project Omega

07.12.15
217
0
2-13

TITANIC!

07.12.22
67
0
2-14

The legends of Sleepy Hollow and Rip Van Winkle

07.12.23
115
0
2-15

Curious George Goes to the Hospital

08.01.05
112
0
2-16

Mr. Gumpy's Outing

08.01.0540
0
2-17

Leo the Late Bloomer

08.01.0553
0
2-18

Clifford's puppy days

08.01.0592
0
2-19

Caps for sale

08.01.0578
0





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TOTALS:
1988
0
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.


  • My best book review: Project Omega
    • There are many words
    • I can understand about this story easily.


5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?
0

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? 0

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? 0

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

0

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?0

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
0



  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
0



  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
0



  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
0



  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
0

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? 0



  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?


    • __2_ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.


    • diary (78)

    • photos (65)

    • reviws (44)

    • bookd (32)
    • quickposts (23)
    • essays (12)
    • links (14)
    • movies (10)
    • cooking (7)
    • portfolios (5)
    • media (4)
    • news (1)
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? 0



  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
0



  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?


    • 63 posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? 0



  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*


    • __3_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? 0



  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?


    • __3_ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:


    1. short movie (taken by cellphone)

    2. song with picture (download from You tube)

    3. funny movie (download from You tube)

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. layout
  2. photos
  3. links

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • I think writing many sentences in English are good for improving our writing skills. I can remove my dislike for writing in English. But sometimes I write wrong English on my blog. I am not good at English user still, so I couldn’t find my mistake. I usually use Word for creating posts, but it is also cannot to find my mistake. I think I need study English grammar more and more and I want to check my blog from native English speaker.


7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • At first, writing many posts in English is very difficult and tired work for me. But now, it is not so hard. I did not post many times on September and October so I had to post many times on December and January. Writing many book reviews was very hard work for me. I think it is important for us to make up schedule for blog.


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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

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