2007/07/15

T☆G☆I☆F


Last Friday, I went to dinner with member of TOEFL class. Because that day we ended the class.

First, we went to Andes. It is restaurant of Peruvian dishes. I had never eaten Peruvian dishes. We ate many dishes. For example, tacos, coconuts curry, and so on. We also drank foreign alcohol. I like tecate. It is beer, it from Mexico. I think it is easer to drink than Japanese beer.

Then, we went Jaff’s world bar. It’s world bar and there are many foreign people. I drank many grass of alcohol. In this bar, almost people speak in English, so we also speak in English, too. I think this bar is very good. Because drink are delicious and cheap. And we can improve own skill of English conversation. Tuesday is universal student’s day. You can drink all alcohol in 400 yen!! Usually, you can drink as much drinks as you want for 2000 yen in 2 hours. Why don’t you try this bar?? This bar located at “simo tori”.

Gmail and writing studio blog

Gmail is very useful software. You can send E-mail and check it anywhere. And you can enjoy chat with anyone who has a Gmail address. If you get invitation from Gmail user, you can get the Gmail address free.
Last February I got my Gmail address. Because I need it for my writing class. Prof.Tomei send me the invitation. At first, I did't know Gmail. Getting my Gmail address was easy for me. And I can get it immediately. After I got my Gmail address, I chatted with Prof. Tomei.
I use a Gmail except writing class. For example, I send some pictures by Gmail. I use these pictures for this blog. You know, this blog can post anywhere, too. So if I send pictures on Gmail, I can post blog with pictures. Some times I also send draft for my paper by Gmail. I have to write many papers but I don't have enough time. So in lunchtime, I think aboute my paper, type a part of draft, and send it for my Gmail address by my celluar phone. After that, I'll open that mail, and cut and paste a part of draft into Word. It is very useful tool, isn't it?
I'll talk about Writing studio blog. It is Prof. Beaufait's blog. Of cause there are information for our writing class. But there are many kind of posts. For example, restaurant review, movie review, and so on. Some times I need my English dictionary for read this blog. Bat it is not so difficult for me and maybe I can increase my vocabulary. This blog has many pictures and rinks. I think this is a fun blog.

2007/07/11

portfolio

ID: 6166
Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog

Titles of posts with links
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words
Numbers of comments
Example
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.03.13
185
1
1st (introduction)
April (150+ words)
seif-introduce
2007.04.11
172
0
2nd (campus life)
May (200+ words)
My campus life
2007.05.24
248
0
3rd (your choice)
June 5 (250+ words)
My favorite *^-^*
2007.06.17
442
6
4th (Kumamoto)
June 18 (250+ words)
What is the Kumamoto people
2007.06.17
336
2
5th (review 1)
July 2 (175+ words)
Web site review
2007.06.30
180
5
6th (review 2)
July 16 (200+ words)
Gmail and writing studio blog
2007.7.15
279
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TOTALS:
1842
14
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

I think “What are Kumamoto people” is the best of my essays, because this essay is logical, and easy to read.

2.0. Comments

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Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog
Dreamgirls
2007.04.17
15
bad(short)
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog which is bad?
2007.05.10
36
good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog
what is the Kumamoto people
2007.06.21
60
good!(including advice for me)
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays
my favorite *^-^*
2007.06.06
53
good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.06.06
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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45
good(I responded soon)
2.4.2. Any of your other posts
web site review
2007.07.04
30
good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.07.04
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? ---
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18
bad(short)





* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:

I got many comment from my classmate. Some people gave me good advices. My replay was a little short. Next term, I would like to write longer replay for good comment.


3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

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Numbers of words
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial
47
2007.04.18
3.2. Best typing speed trial
104
2007.06.20
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials
97
2007.06.13
2007.06.20
2007.06.27




4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog Titles of posts with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) Number of words Numbers of comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
2007.05.16
39
1
1-01

Babe-Pig in the city-

2007.04.22
92
0
1-02
The wrong Trousers
2007.04.27
170
0
1-03
Love or Money
2007.05.01
114
0
1-04
Curious George and the Fire-Fighter
2007.05.05
63
0
1-05
finding NEMO
2007.05.06
77
0
1-06
Marry Queen of Scots
2007.05028
175
0
1-07
Sinbad
2007.06.02
54
0
1-08
Heidi
2007.06011
56
0
1-09
William Tell
2007.06.26
30
0
1-10

Robinson Crusoe

2007.06.26
75
0
1-11
The Winner
2007.06.28
54
0
1-12
Mulan
2007.06.29
68
0








































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TOTALS:
1028
0
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

  • I think 1-02 is the best of in my book review.
    • Because there are many words.
    • I can understand content of this book easily.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

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Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?
0

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? 0

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week? 0

5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?
0

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? 0

5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately): ---
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  • "books" (plural)
0

  • "essays" (plural)
0

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)
0

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? 0

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • 2
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  • Which labels, and how many posts each?
    • diary(19)
    • books(12)
    • quickpost(11)
    • essay(6)
    • brass(5)
    • movie(2)
    • news(1)
    • tv(1)
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5.3. Links & media ---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures? 0

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
0

  • How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics?
    • 32
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5.3.2. Posts with multiple links ---
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  • How many of your posts include three (3) or more links?
    • 5
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? 0

  • How many of your blog posts include other media?
    • 3
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5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

I want to enhance my article. I think some times I have mistakes. I would like to check my article before post it by using “Word”.



6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:

Before I start this blog, I don’t like to write in English, because it is very hard work for me, and I need much time. But now, I write easier than before. It is fun for me to post my article on my blog. I want to be better blogger.



7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:

I think this class is very unique. In this class, I could remove fear of writing from me. Making blog is fun. Comments from my classmate became encouragement to be better writer. If you write the more, you would be the better writer.


I got it !!!!!

Last Sunday(July 8), I had a Kumamoto competition of brass. It was my first time to take part in adult part. And I took part in this competition after an interval of 4 years. So I was a little nervous. But I did my best!! Our brass band got a gold prize, and we can go to Kyushu competition!!! I was very happy :-) we have a Kyushu competition on August 26 in Nagasaki. I’ll practice to play the trumpet very hard. I want to get a gold prize on this competition.

2007/07/09

bar review

I recommend 2 bar.

The first one is “bar Milan”. We can drink as much as you want for 1000 yen an hour there. And you can sing too! It’s very cheap isn’t it?? This bar’s drink is very good. I like this bar. If I have party at near this bar, and I want to drink more, I’ll go there. This bar is not so big. So actually, I wouldn’t want to teach this bar. This bar is located on sakae street, and in front of “second site”. If you have a chance, please try this bar.

The second one is “yonenoya”. This is Japanese bar. This bar saves many good dishes. Maybe you will be able to satisfied with many dish. This bar has a big room. So you can have a big party there. If you tarn the corner of “ikedaya” on shimotori, you can find this bar on your right hand.

2007/07/04

COMPETITION

This weekend, I have a big competition. It’s a brass competition of Kumamoto prefecture.

I'm a little nervous. If we get a greate prize, we can go to Kyuusyuu competition. I want to go it. I'll do my best!!!